Some Killer Bunnies Are More Equal Than Others

http://99designs.com/contests/8524/entries/571597

Thanks guys…

Quick reminder to everyone, I am giving an exclusive, never before seen copy of the book that myself and Barry wrote, so be as detailed as you can in your feedback.

Much appreciated.

Dean

oooh, I don’t mind the new one from Jesse - Lee. I really like the ‘fluffy’, soft body, but if its a critic you want - how about changing the pink for red, and instead of making him angry have him look a little more devious - a sly smile.. but love the ears and body…. Lisa

Hi Dean,

I think the design by Pinky (21) is the best – looks like a rabbit and can pull off both cute and sinister.

The designs by Innova (10, 23, 32) could be good if it looked more like a rabbit, at the moment it looks more like a pokemon character.

If you want to ignore “cute” and just go for sinister I think 14 and 20 pull this off quite well.

Hope this is of use to you!

Kind Regards,

David

I agree with what people have said above about having cute and cuddly bunnies with a hidden evil edge. I do like the top design and now the artist has shown more versatility by adding props I like it even more.

But I still really like #13 because it’s such a simple drawing and so well done. I just think the artist is really talented and could create some great work for you. It reminds me of Happy Tree Friends (http://happytreefriends.atomfilms.com/)…if you haven’t seen it you’ll be humming the theme song all day. The artist has also been on 99designs for longer and had many winning designs which could be important since you probably need an ongoing relationship.

I know you have the minimalist vision in your head though so perhaps the top one is what you should go for. But note the English error on the profile and just make sure you can communicate your ideas effectively to her.

BTW for the people commenting. I’ve seen the draft of the report Dean’s offering as a prize and it’s killer stuff. Considering how much value his free reports have offered I’m surprised more of you aren’t going all out to win it!

OK, open your eyes and listen because you’ll soon receive feedback on all of your bunnies. I’m gonna suppose that the bunnies were alive and gonna give my impression on what they’re saying (and rate them and give small comment).

#1 - I’m some strange bunny with X (ordinary, rate:2)

#2 - I’m a strange bunny with X and a stick. I fight you and take blood (just enhanced version of the previous one, rate:3)

#3 - I’m a bunny, look at me! (his style is more like ‘helpless’ than ‘I’m a killer’ rate:3)

#5 - I rob, I kill I..surf? (it doesn’t give a good initial impression, rate:3)

#6 - I kill, I surf (the same like #5, rate:3)

#7 - i have bloood, you nigga (I like this because it gives a good first impression with a “style” rate:4)

#8 - I’m helpless bunny with blood behind me! (nah, rate:3)

#9 - Wazzup! (it looks more like a “cool killer” than a true killer bunny, rate:3)

#10 - I look like good, but don’t make me mad! (haha, this is good, it is from one extreme to another, rate:4)

#12 - I’m gonna show ya something, ready all? (looks like going to kill, not really killing, rate:3)

#13 - Don’t freak me, I’m already a freak (nice face, makes me laugh, rate:5)

#14 - boooooooooo (alien! rate:3)

#15 - hehe, who’s next? (sorry, little ordinary, rate:3)

#16 and #17 - killing rocks! (little ordinary, rate:3)

#18 - My mom told me to do it, it’s not my fault! (it doesn’t really looks in “killing style”, rate:3)

#19 - Go here if you wanna… (somehow stands out, rate:5)

#20 - Weirdo (rate:3)

#21 - I’m cute, but wait to see me how cute I am! (nice combination, rate:5)

#22 - 1960? (rate:2)

#23 - (it doesn’t give a full impression it’s a true killing bunnies, rate:3)

#24 - Mysterious….(it’s one of my favorites, rate:4)

#26 - So you wanna….eh? (typical, rate:3)

#27 - knock knock, guess who’s back! (it leaves nice impression, rate:4)

#28 - haha looks like the “big fat boss” (rate:4)

#29 - No mercy! (looks like nice story, rate:5)

#30 - Hiiii!! (surprising, rate:4)

#31 - Hi! (ordinary, rate:3)

#32 - I’m super sophisticated bunnie! (rate:4)

So, the best:
#13, #21, #19, #29

My choice is the last one. It comes close to what our Dean Hunt is like.

Really like 20 & 26. They are not “bloody” and do not have children in the graphic.

A killer bunny must be cute.
No fangs, no gore, no gangster suit.
A baby-face, a fuzzy bottom,
If girls say “awww…” you know you’ve got ‘em.
Bring it on — the shocked surprise
To be whumped between the eyes.

His stumpy arms look way too small
To do you any harm at all.
His little eyes reveal no mind
To think up evil from behind.
What kind of killer could he be?
I’m watching now — oh, you’ve killed me!

You surely know the ones I mean.
Their money isn’t the right green.
Their reading could offend one creed.
But little tweaks are all you need.
One bunny does the job for me
And it’s inovva’s 23.

Hi Dean,

These are the criteria I employ when judging a logo:
1. It must be describable.
2. Memorable.
3. Effective in one colour
4. Scalable.

Taking these criteria into account, this is what I think about the top 2 logos:

Logo #32 (my favourite) by Inovva

1. A cute, innocent-looking white, Pokemon-like bunny with tiny red fangs and horn-like red fluff in its ears.
2. It’s simplicity of form and facial expression, means it will be timeless. Think Hello Kitty & Snoopy.
3. As it only uses two colours (not counting white), it will be as strong in black and white as it is in colour. It will also work as an outline.
4. Its simplicity, again, means it will work at small and large sizes. Reduce it to a small size, and it’s outline is still recognizable. And, it will translate very well into a 3D figure (think merchandising).

On top of this, it has more character than the more ‘expressive’ bunnies, as it’s not immediately evident who/what it is: a killer bunny. The other designs are too literal and therefore obvious. This bunny is multi-dimensional. Ok, the fangs give it’s darker side away a bit, but then that’s counterweighed by the sheer cuteness of it. You would forgive this bunny it’s trespasses. It’s very, very cute. Reminds me of a character (or rather characters) in the current UK Dr Who series (http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Partners_in_Crime_(Doctor_Who). It’d like to see it in a HUNTer’s outfit (pun intended).

The illustrator has also shown they’re not a one-trick pony, I mean bunny (ouch). The design demonstrates:
– great spacial design
– consistent look applied to other elements
– scope in the look to have a range of characters (siblings, cousins)
– and most importantly, a sense of humour.

As, #32 is by far my favourite, I have less to say about my 2nd and 3rd runners up.

Logo #28 by Adam Burleig
1. It must be describable: A fat bunny, shaped like a half-sphere, who looks like he’s seen better days (and has eaten a lot of jelly beans)
2. Memorable: It’s girth makes it different from most other bunnies, but it could be mistaken for a mouse with long ears.
3. Effective in one colour: in one colour this may look more like a blob than a bunny.
4. Scalable: The face loses all definition at smaller sizes, so the ears are the only thing that make it seem like a bunny.

Character: Seems middle-aged or menopausal and looks like it’s eaten most of its victims. Not particularly nimble. But, I chose it as it does have a sense of character.

Logo #21 by Pinky
1. It must be describable: A pudgy bunny with a very expressive (currently angry) face.
2. Memorable: It’s got a nice 3D form which is quite memorable, if undistinctive.
3. Effective in one colour: This will work equally well in one colour. It has a nice graphic feel to it’s outline.
4. Scalable: The simplicity of this design means it scales well (down or up).

Character: Although this bunny is fluffy, it’s menacing facial expression immediately let’s you know this is one mean bunny. Which kind of makes it less interesting for me. There’s nothing to discover. But, this bunny could work like the first one (no. 32), if it’s expression were softened.

Would love to win the book (here’s hoping…).

All the best,

IH

I Hoffman,

Wow, great feedback.

I should stress that they are not technically logos. I am actually using them in low-quality videos… but that is not to say they won’t become logos… as they may well do so.

Thanks again.

Dean

Joanne,

Exactly. Who in their right minds could resist?

Speak soon.

Dean

They all suck dude… i recommend you hire a designer

Can i please have my book now?

THNX

Hey Dean,

No doubt in my mind. Either #32 or #23, both by inovva.

Each one has a nice style and appeal to the eye.

Also, they appear to fit in with your present scheme.

I look forward to seeing what you choose.

Best,

Scott

Hey Dean…

Gotta go w/ the top design.

To me… the top design the bunnies have more broad appeal because they aren’t as ‘rough’ and ‘mean’ looking as some of the other ones.

I don’t know… to virtually everyone the words “killer” and “bunny” are seldom seen together (which of course is part of what makes it work to call attention to it). For me, it’s more effective if the “bunnies” are less blood and gore… and more “evil mastermind” bunnies like the top image.

Blood and gore can only go so far… but the first pic puts brains behind the “killer bunnies” which also makes the possibilities of what crazy things you can do w/ them even greater.

Anyhow man… the first one is the way to go… has more legs and can be used more broadly.

Chat soon,

- Trevor

I agree with Diane … #26 is easily the best.

He looks like he’s just come from the rabbit version of The Sopranos.

Innova’s are great looking, (a bit like the Adipose from Dr Who) but too cute for my taste.

What I want to REALLY see are the 3 small hamsters on crack powering this blog …

You gonna make them print your book as well or are you leaving that to the half a dozen spliffed-up ferrets living in your basement?

Dean, am wondering who won the ‘best feedback’ prize?